by Jayme Jan 16, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
She sat there, with her razor locked thight in her hand. Not knowing what to do after the loss of something so meaningful in her life. As she took the cold metal and wiped it acrossed her skin she began to feel the pain pain lift from her heart. Gently she sliced at her arm again not knowing how deep she was really going. She layed there trapped in her own pool of blood and tears, not wanting to live anymore she took the razor and slid it once more threw her vein. Feeling the life flow out of her she wondered why she had listened to all the lies. Her soul had dieed not to long ago, now it was time for her mind and body to join it. Nobody knew why she felt she must die, no one understood the pain she had inside. |
by Heather
Thanks for your comment. In a way your poem did rhyme and it is easy to understand. For people that actually do it knows exactly why. Good Job! Keep it Up! "5" |
by Sami
Whoa... That must've been something you've been feeling there! -rates 5- |