Work in progress

by GerardMCR   Jan 16, 2006


One step up
Two steps down
that is how
My life is found
Every time I get ahead
Something always stopes me dead
I work so hard everyday
i don't have time to stop and play.

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  • 18 years ago

    by GerardMCR

    Thanks cuddles

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    You have to take time to stop and play. Otherwise, how will you be able to enjoy life? I really like this poem, though. Great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I LOVE it. Very true for most. I guess more so for a devoted wife and mother! I have a lot of respect for you!

    Love always, Poetvoices :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Ok - you've got a nice little rhyming scheme going but i still think it lacks in emotion not much but a little - but its still a great poem keep up the work =)

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