by Rican Chemistry Jan 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I understand not but one thing |
by kayla T
This is really good ! keep it up! |
God you are so good!!! it's not easy to let go of love like my poem said it's hard but i tried and i found somebody better and i'm happier now. keep up the good work and keep me posted on new poems you write plz!!!! |
by wahwahweewah
I know how it feels to walk around w/a smile on your face, but know that it's really not how your feeling.. i dont want to say that I know exactly how you feel.. becuz I'd be lying. this was a great poem by the way.. i just know what it's like to completely want some one so bad.. but inside refuse to give up on them because it's hard to give up on something that you never or once had.. but I wish you the best of luck.. and keep writing.. cuz I loved the poems |
by kareeenuhhh
That is sooooooo beautiful!!!!!! GREAT WORK!!!!!!! |
by Passionate
Wow, i like this.. a lot! the words flow so nicely, i wish i could write like that. it actually makes me sad since i cant and i try, hopefully i can evenyually write like you. i also like it since i relate to it. its everything i wanted to say and tried but never got right, it should be my poem! lol later |