Great poem! very origional, iv not read one about rain before :)
keep up the great work
luv em xxx

I wrote it ages ago, I think this one's a bit different to the original, should I try and find that version for you?

When it comes to nature poems, structure is harder. Nature is more of captivating the read with images.

Yeah u could, that would be good, im always happy to read them! xxx

Cheers D, but I'm not much of a one for structure, I often find it to constraining and a bit limited. I guess you may have noticed I don't use it a whole lot! :-)