Thanx Keke, that's really nice of you to say, not good that you can relate to it I suppose, but I guess I'm glad I'm not the only one!

This is a very good poem, and you definitely were accurate, and the structure was well done. That's how you do it :)

Yes, this was a very vivid and descriptive poem, really captured the emotions. loved it! 5/5
luv xxEmmaxx

Thank you for you're v. nice+ generous comments, is the structure actually decent?! :-)

Hey, about what your comment on "Nightmare"? I guess in some ways it's not as bad as drugs but it is addictive and harmful, I hate to think that there are other people out there doing the same. I don't think it's the right way to deal with things but once you get in it's like anything else, hard to get out. I'm not proud of it, quite the opposite, and cause of my experience I can never condone cutting. Maybe it helps for a while, but in the end it just creates new problem you have to deal with.
But...yeah, thats just my take on it.
Again thanks for your comments, and I love this poem, you've expressed yourself very well. Well Done.
*VioletRaven*
P.S. and yes! the structure is more than decent, its great!

You did well on this poem
very nice structure

Thanx for the comment on my poem, i really appreciated it, but, "you thinking of following suit? please don't, take refuge in writing really good poems!" what do u mean? lol like following suit as in killing myself? and taking refuge in writing really good poems? u mean write down what i feel about it, 'cause that's what i do lol, i'm sorry i just got really confused. Anyways, i read some of ur poems, and this one called out to me, i really liked it, and i'm sure that a lot of people can relate to it as well as me, so good job, and keep ur head up chickie pie!
-Jenna xo