This poem is so sad, it made me cry. aww
and i am sorry but i cant think of any titles for this one at moment, will get back to you soon
tara xxx

That was very beautiful, in of course a dark sort of way! I can only give slight advice... and of course that is to use some commas and periods, because it gives your poem a rhythm and tells the reader when the sentence is over. And I think u meant *Thought* not *Though* lol missed the T. And as for a name... I have no idea!=(

This was a really good one. :)
Great job.
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And your welcome for the advice im here to help (Or try at least) lol
If you wanna talk just message me im always here for you. xD
kk well yea
Love Always
--NErdyPants

Brilliant job. realy wellwritten

5/5

This was really well written. The rhyme was also well thought out. i just think some parts kinda slowed down the flow due to excess of syllables. But I really liked the entire depiction. Its so cinematographic to me really. ANd I love the way this is the alternate view, not the typical 'Im cutting my wrists cause Im sad' poem, but one about the aftermath without being cliché. Again, very nicely done.