Its sweet. lol. I liked it. It was very sensual. It was a nice story. 5/5

Lol....so sweet storyish write....:-)...very cute!!
kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Ha sweet man, I don't like love poems much but being fam I gotta appreciate this. Its very realistic, short but with a lot of meaning. The third stanza shook the flow a bit but all in all its good. 5/5 MCL

Hey gurl love the poem and damn weather does the strangest things..lol

A fun lil love poem. lol it was filled with your happy emotions and such. A great read 5/5