Broken Angel

by Chantelle   Jan 16, 2006


Tattered wings
A broken soul
A wound to deep to heal
Teary eyes
Slitted wrists
The pain is all she feels
A broken angel
On her knees
Praying through the night
To be helped
To be loved
And for something to go right
Another night
Unanswered prayers
She starts to lose all hope
One more cut
One final tear
This angel couldn't cope

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    You know what
    youre mad
    youre one of the happiest and chirpiest and bubbliest people i know....and you write such sad poems...
    the way you ended it killed me. this angel couldnt cope. my heart stopped beating after reading that line. YOU ARE SO SO SO AMAZING. and damn, i just remembered i havnt added u to my favourites...i think i will now...

    your next poem HAS TO BE A HAPPY ONE!!!! ITS A DARE LOL...
    take care hun..cya

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    That was good but hang in there i bet there is alot of ppl out there that love you but havent had a chance to show it 5/5 keep it up. im always here if you need to talk

  • 18 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    Wow!I'm speechless!Your are an amazing writer!You really know what to write to bring out the emotion you feel!Well done!P.S.ty for commenting mine

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Oh my gosh..this is one of the saddest and most pain-filled poems I've ever read. If this is about you, I am so sorry, and I hope that you're okay. If you ever need anything I'm always here. Beautiful writing though, keep up the great work!

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