The Torment and Hurt Part II

by The Poetic Child   Jan 17, 2006


The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

i was about to take the knife
just make it all end
but i couldn't really do it
i had to defend

if i was to die
Then i could never see
My baby that i love
I know where meant to be

I tried to call her again
just to see if thing OK
but she never answered
there was nothing i could say

i tried to keep calling
but she never answered back
the more i tried to call
the more love had to lack

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I texted her on the cell
telling how much i love her
The future that i can see
her being a future mother

i kept leaving text's on her phone
hoping she would reply
I was telling myself she'll text back
though i just said a lie

Tears racing down so fast
Breathing getting Terrible
i was gonna past out
facing the um-bearable

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

i was about to give up
i was going to just stop
my smile became low
my heart just went to drop.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    This poem is just as great as your others! youre a great poet!...

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    That was even better than the first one! you have a real nack for this stuff! i really encourage you to get this published. if i could rate it a 10/10 i would! But 5/5/ is the best, so keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Aww this is so sad...don't worry she'll come 2 realise one day tha she gave up on sumone really great. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow this poem is better than the first one.. Great job and I love all your work.. This poem is full of emotion and well put together... keep it up.. Your an amazing poet!!! 5/5