Hidden Identity

by Sharon   Jan 17, 2006


You put on a mask
to hide who you were
Not from everyone
only from her,

She was blind
you hid yourself well
She fell for a stranger
but she couldn't tell,

You were quiet and mature
she loved that about you
You tricked her into thinking
all her dreams had come true,

So she fell for the lie
or rather your mask
But finding the truth
now that was a task,

She fell for you hard
a dream come true for you
But a dream it seemed only
because to her you weren't true,

You acted the way she wanted
the perfect man you could be
But lieing to her left you hurting
only you could feel your heart bleed,

Everyone thought it was perfect
the love you had seemed to find
But no one could see that'd you'd tricked her
they thought she loved you for your mind.

Then eventually she couldn't take it
Guess what?
She Found Out The Truth,

Not the guy she expected
no that's not the guy under the mask
You were totally different
and that was hard to grasp,

See I was the girl you were tricking
and tho your intentions were true
I've gotta admit that without your mask
I would have never fallen for you,

Maybe now you should consider
all the things you put me through
But the worst part about it all
is that I really feel sorry for you,

You changed yourself for me
because it was me that you wanted
But you lost your identity
and then you were confronted,

All the lies you made
to get a single girl
Are getting thrown at you
and it's rocking your whole world,

Don't worry you'll be fine
I know this for a fact
You could always just change your identity for that!

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  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Hey this is a brilliant poem, very well written keep up the excellent work
    Thankyou for your comment on "I Need You"
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Great poem and it reminded me of some ppl that i met that lie alot.. but otherwise keep it and thanx for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Rly good poem. keep writing.
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    Hey i really like this poem,completely original. it really sucks when ppl lie abt stuff huh? don't they kno, it's only a matter of time tha u wud find out. anyways take care hun.

    Stacy