Thats really good.

Hey i really like this poem i like how you expresed your self through your words you can fill the the pain and sadness keep up the good work

Heyy i love this poem =]
it sets out feelings which i feel so badly everyday ='[
btw i love your profile i know this may not seem like it but i know what your going through and i feel the same
this gets a 5/5 from me =']

&&thankies for your comment =']
LoveLoveAlice