by Lost Soul 691 Jan 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I never got to say good-bye |
First off, thanks for your connstructive criticism- it was MUCH appreciated! Secondly, this poem was fantastic. I loved the way you twisted the viewpoint to portray everything through the 'other womans' eyes. very creative. Your word choice and the rhythm flow perfectly. Very good write! |
by *~Emma~*
This poem is very sweet, i loved your choice of words...they expressed your emotions well! thanks for the read! |