Omg this is sooo sweet. short and right down to it. i love it. i really hope u and ur man work out!!!! 5/5

: ) this poem was fantastic!!! I'm so glad to read that you and your boyfriend are sooo in love!!! Best of luck to the both of you!!! This poem was really sweet!!! Keep it up!!
Luv jess xoxoxo

That was really sweet and it had a lot of emotion but not a lot of rhythm or flow. it was still a 5 though cause that feeling of love is unmistakable.

You make like the shortest poems but yet u make them so powerful and great..excellent job...Really Really Great 5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Short, sweet poem. Try to experiment by not always using the same words.

Aaawwwwwww... this is so cute.. im starting to wonder if i ever fall in love am i gonna feel this crazy and be able to write such short poems with SOO much emotion.. :P gud luck to the both of u.. u didnt reli rhyme, but it was reli gr8
take care
keep it up, hunni
Nouna

It is short but good the reader can really feel the emotion. I noticed some lines rhymed while others didnt maybe you might wanna try making all of them or none. I also agree that you could be more creative with the words. Overall I liked it and I could so see that going in a card :)

Awwww.....isnt that sweet. it was really good. keep it up.
Emma 5/5

This is sweet and very cute. i would have to say. i really like this one also. You are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

So tender and sweet!
It's a blessing to have someone's true love.

That was sweet I'm sure he'd love it

OK. I really think this is a wonderful poem. I am sure he will love it.

But, I think it needs to be longer, but if you can't think of anything, don't ruin your poem. And also, I think the ending is a little weak, but that's just me. Your poems rock.

I know we'll make it through anything
I do love you more than life itself
I am so lucky to be with you!!

I dunno what you could put as the ending. hmm.

It's cute. If you to read this to a guy/girl, it'd be adorable. I can't say that it's a brilliant work of art, because it isn't, but it sounds like a little cutsy thing between lovers.

Aw thats such a cute poem
it flows well and shows true feeling 5/5
keep it up
~pip xoxXxox

I am truly glad that you are happy in love!!

Thats very nice!
has all the love emotions in it
it was short nice, straight to the point
keep it up