I Won't Let You Bring Me Down Anymore

by ...Wanna-be Poet...   Jan 17, 2006


In those rare moments when I feel fine,
You bring me down and my all healed wrist develops a crimson line.

When I finally start to feel alright,
You bring me down and I end up crying all night.

I'm sick of this, I'm sick of you,
You bring me down and I'm sick of everything you make me do.

Now to separate us I'm building a mental door,
You're no longer doing this,
I won't let you bring me down anymore.

[This one was about my Mum. I don't feel that it's my best work but I like it because that's how i feel at the moment]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is so sad, and ironically enough I relate so well. Not with the slashing wrists part, but when you said it was for your mum. I understand what it's like for your mother to constantly bring you down. I wish I could help. Wonderfully written, though.

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Hey! thought id write n thank you for the comments...and also to tell u how proud i am of u! u have a right to be happy with urself, what ur doing is sooo hard, and it is such an achievement that u have finally turned round to face it. your an inspiration to us all :). and i have been a gem, for a gem! lol. we have the word over here too in little england heehee!
    luv u lots huni,
    take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    I absolutely loved it!! great work huni, n keep up the fantastic progress. 5/5! lots of luv,
    xxEmxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nahibi Maldonado

    Aweosme poem, it's very deep. 5/5

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