This Is Insane

Nitin
Very dark and intense. Your imagery here is great. Taking the reader into your imagination.

Kiss stars
from burning moon
future dies
forever is ending soon

These lines set off the entire poem. Very scary.
Great!
Love Cindy

I like it, very different but again a good different, there may be some flow issues but not major and congradulations for the contest pleacement

Woah that was really deep and really good definet 5/5 Keep up the good work
xox
P.S sorry I ahven't been commenting l8ly I havent been on to much skools beign stupid and giving way to much work lol

Nitin,

Filled with many dark emotions, you choice of words did make the poem stand out. Good Job!

Thanks for your comment on my poem, I have learnt various poetry forms from studying books about poetry. I will write some poems in poetic forms from time to time as a challenge to myself, but most of the time will write free verse.

Keep up the good work.

Best regards,

Steve

Wow... mind blowing. The more I read your poems, the more I get speechless. How do you write such amazing poems? Can I know the secret? Excellent work. Sure deserves a 5.