Losing You

by Tine   Jan 17, 2006


I'm losing you, and I just know
can't believe what's happening, no
It's all too much, like you told me
the other day
and I feel you don't want to stay
here

I don't want to lose you now,
I'm loving you this much
I understand the way you feel, how
You miss her, her touch

But You know she wouldn't have wanted you to die
so soon, after her, so sad
your mother really loved you
but you have to stay for your dad

And In the end I'll still be there for you
You'll get over it, I know you'll do
Together with your dad, You can't do this to him
It's really important for him that you're there too
He cant lose 2
I cant lose you
and Still I feel I'm losing you
please get over it; please do...

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  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Another moving pease, filled with longing to help, and empathic pain. You can really feel for both you and the family the poems about. Best Wishes to all, though it may sound shallow.

    Andrew

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Well...
    this poem is so much different from the rest
    it gives the impression of a desparate girl trying pleeding to reach out to another....
    so so sad
    but very well written you captured the moment here sweetie
    keep it up
    love ya lotsies
    MWAH xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by MariiaShan

    Hey,WHo was this poem about?

    MariA
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