Wonderfull words, hun. I really liked the way you wrote this. So much creativity and it's beautifully unique. Keep up the excellent work!

I enjoyed reading this one. good rhyme and good choice of words.
you did a great job.
take care,
marjan

Aww i like this one! good job!
Take Care!

CK

There's so much said and so much left unsaid in your poems
this is good!

good luck and peace
shobhana

Nice. i really like:
Reasonable words are sometimes said
as it is joined by a thread
i was left on fantasy
through the simphony of the music