by obsessedgurl Jan 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
When I first saw you, I had to look twice |
by Loulou
I liked it great job |
by NIKKI
That was really great. Your extremely talented without a doubt. The flow was perfect and the rhyma amazing keep up the good work. |
I liked it alot but the word boo got overused. it tells a grrt story in sequence. i like how u number the times u meet him. thx for commenting on my poem!!! |
by Emilia
Thanks for checking out my poem :D I voted a 5 for this one.. Great! hugs from Emilia =) |
Aww, that is so sad. it was an excellent poem though, great job. |