*hugs her* THAT WAS GREAT!! I cried. It was amazing and superb. Keep it up!!

I say You should call it Split in Two

Thanks for the ideas guys.

Aww, that is so sad. it was an excellent poem though, great job.

Thanks for checking out my poem :D I voted a 5 for this one.. Great! hugs from Emilia =)

I liked it alot but the word boo got overused. it tells a grrt story in sequence. i like how u number the times u meet him. thx for commenting on my poem!!!

That was really great. Your extremely talented without a doubt. The flow was perfect and the rhyma amazing keep up the good work.

I liked it great job

tabby