So powerfully sad, but excellent writing!

Wow awsome 5/5

Wow, this was very meaningful yet sad. It got straight to the paint with its simpleness yet it had great depth.
Take care
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Hey, this is nice, I can read alot of meaning 'between the lines' even though it is quiet short and appears brief. I think the rhyming in the first half sounds better then the second half, but then the flow in all of this works well and makes it stand out. Nice poem :)

Very powerful poem, very deep.

5/5

The structure was cool and the way it remained with the short words giving quick glimpses was great.
~Unforgiven

I really loved this poem....its really different and I loved that. Thnx for ur comments...5/5

::MELI::

I can relate to those words...well my ex-girlfriend had the same problems and she cut herself to...those words u write remind me of her and how she finally stopped...5/5 all the way

Hey thanx for telling me what POV means =] I really like this poem..i feel like i can relate to it, i got kicked out of school last year..but yeh..keep it up =] luv natz x0x

Another good poem! I understand what you mean by needing to let your feelings out. I do that a lot in my poems too. I think I mostly write them so that I won't do anything too drastic that could have negative consequences later on.
Keep up the good work because I believe that you have a lot of talent. If you ever need someone to talk to you can always email me. Keep on smiling. :)
*5/5*

This was good! Short but good. It held alot of emotion. And I liked that. It's good that you put your feelings down on paper, To help you through things.

I think I have done 6 or 7 poems so far, Was that how many I was meant to do? If I was meant to do more, Please just tell me in my thread. And Thank you again for the comments and advice. It helped alot!

Excellent poetry! I can relate to this so much. I loved it because it was short but captured a lot of emotion. When you can relate is the time that you feel the pain the most. Keep it up girl! 5/5

Well, i can relate to this a lot...and in that sense i really love it, it is sad tho that people think like this, even i will admit it i hate thinking like this, but i cant change how i feel...But, it was wonderful