by Cueball24
Cool. Amazing. |
U ve d lov for him...tel him |
Even though this is not a kind of in a poem form, it spoke your mind, it spoke your heart. it spoke what you feel, so really this is a free verse, either way its a poem....to answer your ? only for now its Lust...Its lust, because, before love comes lust, It can become love when he notices you and talks to and he has lust for you, then comes in love...You must go through the phase of Lust b4 love...thats just my opinion you can take it or not doesnt really matter..just sayin wat i think..nice poem though 5/5 great job, keep in touch ttyl sometime |
by Ruthie
Hey there I agree with the poet on the first part but on the second I'll hav 2 disagree... lol... sorry poet!... this is just my opinion but Lust is more powerful than a crush... and I think from the sounds of it that ur falling in love with him but I think u can only truely be in love if u both agree that your'e in love... lust is just sexual desire but u desire more than that so... *shrugs* I think in the end u have 2 decide and these r just some of my thoughts... *hugs* I hope it all works out... and keep up the good work |
by sarah
Well in my opinion for you I would say you have to look inside yourself to know what your truly feel...but I do understand where ur coming from it sounds to me that you've had a crush on him, thats possibly starting to change to love...one important question to ask yourself is do you feel as strongly 4 him when ur away from him as strongly as u do when he's standing right in front of you? Hope everything works out well for you! |
by CE
This aint even a poem!!!!! but I still love it which is weird maybe its because I go through the same thing, with a girl in my school though |
by CE
Im sorry but I have to disagreee with everybody above saying that its just lust, she could always love him and have it be a unrequited love |
by obsessedgurl
To answer sarah's question, I feel strongly about him no matter where I am and where he is!!! Thanks for the ideas, guys, and i think I have an infatuation with him... But I just wanted to know what people think.... |
by Sierra
INFATUATION!!TRUST ME I WENT throught the same exact thing he sadly had a girlfrind |