Composing Memories (Tetractys)

by HOLLY ARMER   Jan 17, 2006


Time
slips by
composing
songs of the past
as she dances with faded memories

*Tetractys consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    That was sooo beautiful! It made me want to dance and sing and fly and do so many other wonderful things. It just puts you into that "dream" mode of things that you would have never dreamed of, or dreamed of dreaming, before. lol If that makes sense to you haha.
    Great job... and by the way, thanks for your comment on my poem "Broken", I really appreciate it =)
    Take care~ sarahjoy

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is sooo beautiful. i love it. it is soo haunting and sad. i love it. great job!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    That was nice, and it makes sense, some ppl when they do it it doesnt, good job
    when you can , plz chekc out my poem impulse

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    I really like what you have done, i would never beable to do that, thats really pure talent and you are very lucky. well writen and it also puts across your feelings, i like your faded memories i feel i can relate. god bless xxx