Taking me apart

Hey, another really good one. I especially liked this one and the ending you had on it. Taking out the heart so you don't have to feel and becoming numb, just to be put back together afterward. I really liked it, and enjoyed some of the words you used, when the right words are used it makes the poem that much more inspiring. Great job, I hope to see more from you :)

Wow...better than I can do. Good job and keep up the great writing. PS: Thanks for commenting on mine. :)

~Tanya

Wow i love this poem,
thankyou so much for commenting on my poem, it really means alot.
take care always, love ya xx