by Juls Jan 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She called him Ray |
by ♥Leah♥
Honey i was a little confused thru it. but it's still good. i gave it a 4/5. thanks for commenting on my poems. i'm returnign the favor now. |
by Torn
I like the way you used 'Ray' , very cunning. |
by The Wingless
Hey I don't know what to say. (Once again). This poem is awesome. The only things are the format cuts off the flow a little bit and you spelled decided wrong. Other than that great poem. |
Really well written peice. |
by Becca
Wow lol. tht was really good n like pizie said i thought ray was a person too. tht was really good n how its set out n tht. 5/5 |