by ILOV3HIM Jan 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
To my lovely sweetheart |
by Free Spirit
Beautiful, sounds like it's right out from the heart, strong and sweet, one thing though (just a suggestion) if you add, "AND YET" i still do.... it gives a better flow to it, if you know what I mean, but still it's a really nice poem =) |