by Passionate Jan 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Empty as he walks the halls, pretends like it's not hard to get up after a fall. wants it all right now, seems so sad when I'm around, is it just a moment, am i over doing all this, what is it that he longs for? just a kiss? someone to hold, or knowing they're there? i want to help, but i feel so wrong, i wish he would see he isn't alone. i feel like I'm making too much of a big deal, but i do know just how he feels. rejected so many times, i see it in the rhyme of his lines, i want him to know that I'm here, i don't want him to hold any fears. I'm here to call, I'll be there through it all, it's unexplainable why i care this way, but i hope he gets what i have to say. through my despaire and trials, I'll be fine. I'll never look away, i don't know what to say, but i love you, all it takes is you to look out, and some day to realize you should have no doubts. she's there somewhere, probably right behind you, just wait i swear she'll find you. He wanders the halls so empty, cold, his eyes filled with despaire so old, eventually hopefully soon, he'll see she's there and it's meant to be!. |
by just a poet
Great poem, heartfelt and all. a bit hard to read because of the lines running into eachother but a great poem never the less. yeah the name was for the poem not my name. well take care. 5/5 |
by ash
Sarah,hey gurl.It's around 9 and i'm on.So yeah,I like the one about you know who,is that the one i'm under now?Oh well,comment and let me know if your on,well,ttyl babydoll,I love you,and noone loves me! :( oh well,who cares?The person I thought did obviously doesn't,although they keep hugging me and grabbing my sides!!argh,ok,never mind,off subject.I love you babydoll,buh-bye!! |
by ash
Sarah,hey gurl.It's around 9 and i'm on.So yeah,I like the one about you know who,is that the one i'm under now?Oh well,comment and let me know if your on,well,ttyl babydoll,I love you,and noone loves me! :( oh well,who cares?The person I thought did obviously doesn't,although they keep hugging me and grabbing my sides!!argh,ok,never mind,off subject.I love you babydoll,buh-bye!! |