The Hidden Girl

by TinyDancer46   Jan 17, 2006


Across the room they seem to see
A smiling girl who looks like me
With two huge dimples on each cheek
She laughs and talks and always speaks

She's the girl they think would have it all
But inside her is where tears fall
Inside her mask is where I dwell
This broken girl she hides so well

I try to wipe her tears away
But they fall more each coming day
She tries to laugh when her heart breaks
But hurts with every smile she fakes

And inside her is where I dwell
This hidden girl she hides so well
The girl that no one ever sees
Behind a mask that looks like me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Farther From Here

    Beautiful poem. I especially loved this part in your poem-

    "And inside her is where I dwell
    This hidden girl she hides so well"

    Just simply deep, meaningful, great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    Wow. why are you so good? your poems just blow me away. they all have so much meaning and passion. i hope i can write like you some day.

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I can relate to this poem tremendously(sorry if i didnt spell it right) I know wat it feels like. Again, Great job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    5/5 I can relate to this so much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Michelle

    WOW!! you write great. Its really funny how i can relate to this poem. Its well writen.

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