Comments : The Hidden Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by April G

    This si exactly how i am...thi si a perfect poem i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by one.love

    Awesome with a capitol AWE!!
    i think were all hidden inside ourselves.
    unable to show people who we really are.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chloe*

    That was great, short but let out alot of meaning, theyre the best poems... i used to lie about who i was to everyone... lets just say im a good actor, but now i dont have lie anymore, you could say, the mask is missing...:)...i hope this happens for you too...keep up the good work.

    Chloe OxO! read summa my poems.. good ones are 'My love.' and 'Im not afraid.'

  • 18 years ago

    by OverlookedTruth

    Wow

    wow...your an excellent writer. honestly. i love this poem. very well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karry

    I wrote a poem so much like thisd one..its called An Act give me some commentz on it lolz i wuv you poem! lol take kare x o x

  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    Aww this is a very good poem. im soo sorry. its sad but u write very well

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    WOW,WOW,WOW...

    AMAZING...
    I LOVE YOUR WRITING...DEFINETLY KEEP IT UP!! TELL YOUR SIS' SHE IS AN AMAZING WRITER AND TO KEEP IT UP!!
    5/5!!
    ~SARA~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia

    Very sad it relates to how I feel sometimes... It made me wanna cry
    ~*Lydia*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Beautifully Broken*~

    Wow that was a really great poem im exactly like that i give you a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This poem is proof that words hold power. I love your poems more and more with each passing moment that I read them, and today is no exception.
    I know how you feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Omg, i can rly identify with this. in truth, it sounds like ur tlkin about me. thnku 4 putting my life in2 words. i enjoyed reading it.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel leigh

    That was a great poem.. i love reading your poems because i always think of myself when i read them, and you seem to capture that deep feeling in your heart, i wish i could write like that. but keep up the great work...i enjoy reading your poems!!
    -Rachel!

  • 18 years ago

    by reina

    Dam u can write poems good gurl keep up with it 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    This poem fits me. I think it fits a lot of people// I really like this. Comment Back

  • 18 years ago

    by sonia

    Omg gurl u did it again. lol ur makin me jealos of how good u write. thank you for touching my heart with another one of your awesome poems

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vampire tears~*

    I loved your poem rocks. and is really well written.deffinately 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Breyon

    I really like this poem...i think lots of ppl can relate to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This poem is so good, i can see why it got top rated!
    thankyou for your comment i my poem it means alot,
    but anyways this was amazingly written as all of your work is, keep it up
    5/5
    take care,

    holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Oh wow thats a great poem wrote extremely well, great job babe xox me

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    A heartfelt and beautifully written poem.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela