I not only lost you but me too
by toni Jan 17, 2006
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I cryed until the sun came up when i lost you...i was not me any more i felt as i need to die...cutting and choking myself ...but nothing worked ...i would cry and cry ...i would not sleep or not even eat for i have lost your love...tell the day i committed suicide... i was no longer under your spell... but i was no longer alive |
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15 years ago
by Saving Grace
Youve poured alot of dark/sad emotions into this, which is good, it keeps it real..if that makes any sense? Well i think if you set it out in paragraph formation, it might be easier to read. Well done though. 5/5
