Liar

by Lemon Square Bear23   Jan 18, 2006


you told me you loved me,
and I believed you, but you lied
you said we'd be forever
and now we are severed

you told me I had all your love
and I believed you, but you lied
I gave you what I could in return
now you're just a picture to burn

you told me I was enough
and I believed you, but you lied
it was never about me, I was available
I finally saw you as you were, infallible.

You told me I could trust you
and I believed you, but you lied
I'm glad it's over and I can move on
no more of your lies because I am gone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    Such a simple poem yet so true. i love the manner in which you let your emotions out in plain words. beauty is simplicity.

  • 17 years ago

    by Spiker 03

    Hey Kate this is a good one. Your a good writer, Keep up the great work.Luv Ya! your best friend~Morgan~

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I say kill that guy, but hey don't listen to me i believe in the easter bunny. stinkin bunny, running around spreading mischief, laying down hidden multicolored eggs. you know some are forever lost and then they grow rotten and sick.....but i digress, what i meant is good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Excellent. Everyone has already said what i was going to say, lol. But they are all correct.
    Awesome flow and brill message.
    Keep writing
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Misz Luving You

    Gr8 poem very well written. the flow just explains how you feel. and its awesome. keep it up 5/5

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