Wow Bethan!!! gr8 poem. it was a great use of words. it was enlightening becos i have never loved.. so to see someone write so passionatley about the tricky subject of love was absolutley fantastic. now follow the advice you gave me and write more.. ur gr8 jus like ur fella. lol
chaz

I don't like you anymore...your not suppose to be good at poems...you've taken my field, lol. i personally thought it was brilliant...but then again...why wouldn't i. it was full of passion and was extremly creative. i wish i was the guy you were talking abo...wait a minute...i am, lol. yay me. i know you're not very confident about sharing your work...which is why i'm even more proud of you. well done my love, and i hope you'll be writing more...what i meant is...i'll be forcing you to write more.

Brad

P.S. I LOVE YOU MORE!!!

This is my first comment ever!
I couldnt read this without telling you this was a beautiful poem.
I hope to read more of them in time.
thank you

Aww soo goodd
loveddd it!!

I loved it i thought it was beautiful
keep it up
thank u for ur comment im galde u liked it : )

Clara

Super good..♥

Love it.