Wow that is a great poem

Nice, very creating poem.. I like it, amazing work! Keep it up.

I understand, i went through this but with sum1 older, keep ur head up, it hurts but there is always sum1 beta, if he didnt realize ur love e is a fool. xxxx

I know how you feel i was in love and we hd evrything then i gave him what ment most to me my pride and joy i gave him mydelf and he took it and didnt give back becides pain and tears now i dont know how to forgive myself cause i htought he loved me as much as i loved him

That was briliant keep writing xox 5/5

Great poem, i totally agree with u nothing last forever ;)

Hey..i really liked it..great piece of work indeed. no doubt..u r just amazing. this was so beautifully written.

take care and all the best

Amazing poem. I absolutely loved it. Sad but true. You've done a great job here. Excellent poem. Keep it up. You definitely deserve a 5/5. :-)

What can I say, you already know that I am freakin' in LOVE with this poem. lol, keep up the great work! xoxo

Forever is not promised

Same thing somebody's gonna do soon... for some reason..good point.