You're Wrong

by Hareem   Jan 18, 2006


I've come a long way
Being stressful night and day
Life has been to me an odyssey
If you think you'd live here in serenity
You're wrong

Though I've been stoic, I had strangled sighs
The truth now clearly speaks of your lies
Under false pretences, you can't hide facts
You think no one notices your surreptitious acts
You're wrong

Of my deeds and yours, time is the witness
Time is evidential and won't give Forgiveness
A hedonist you are; you think you're astute
With insularity you seek success, time will confute
You're wrong

Your predilection for glass will not make it diamond
No one will intercede once the nemesis has beckoned
If you're a viper, morals are not merely quixotic
You hope to trick everyone by your sordid rhetoric
You're wrong

Chasing the world I became intrepid
But always found its mien tepid
In the path of virtues, the world I tried to propel
Now that my voice has hardened, myself I tell
You're wrong

If you'd ever have a scintilla of good, I am irresolute
But i'd never submit to your meretricious preferences, it's absolute
After all the wrongs you did to me and the cheats I've seen you do
Still you have the illusion that I'll be with you
You're wrong

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Wow.. so amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    Wow.. so amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hey, you kicked me again with another awesome poem. I didn't expect this from someone who's age is unknown. lol this poem kicks chinese fish bum. I really like it.

    But, I don't agree with these rhymes.

    Life has been to me an odyssey
    If you think you'd live here in serenity

    odyssey and serenity, I really think they are forced. Try using synonyms for those two words. I don't kow.

    And the last verse/stanza I don't really like the format.

    But, this poem is good anyways.

    So you mkae up for it, please keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Still you have the illusion that I'll be with you
    You're wrong
    ^^ That has to be my favorite part of the poem... Keep up the great work...
    !^I Love Being In Love^!

  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Loved it