That was great and I don't see why its rated so low. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Loved it

Still you have the illusion that I'll be with you
You're wrong
^^ That has to be my favorite part of the poem... Keep up the great work...
!^I Love Being In Love^!

Hey, you kicked me again with another awesome poem. I didn't expect this from someone who's age is unknown. lol this poem kicks chinese fish bum. I really like it.

But, I don't agree with these rhymes.

Life has been to me an odyssey
If you think you'd live here in serenity

odyssey and serenity, I really think they are forced. Try using synonyms for those two words. I don't kow.

And the last verse/stanza I don't really like the format.

But, this poem is good anyways.

So you mkae up for it, please keep up the good work.

Wow.. so amazing!

Wow.. so amazing!