Sorry to hear that this is happening to you. But broken hearts will heal, and one day you'll be whole again. So please dont give up. |
by disazngurllove
Whoa great poem as always |
by Nicole
Babe... this is an awesome poem... but y so many sad poems still? i see u everyday punk.. i love u |
by Jenn
I like this poem!! its really cute and i like that only a minute has passed...i know what ur saying |
That was a very inspirational piece...I like it very much...that had real meaning to that.....Just Wow... |
by Jenie
..i no we dont talk much anymore but this is my new account ;) |
Hey thats a great poem, it has so much power to it, and I know what its like to look at the clock and feel like hours have passed by but its only been a minute. The flow was so nice, and theres so much emotion (Y) good job! |
Hey cassanova, its cassidy... this poem is sooooo good!!! ur n excellent writer!!!!! |
by Jess
I love this poem, and no exactly what u mean, how these thoughts and feelings can spin round your head so quickly, that not one minute is left alone without you thinking of her :(. im sure it will get better though xxx |
This is aweosome. i've felt this way so many times! |
by naive
Its really good . i kno where youre cuming with that well done xxx |
by DamagedGoods
Thats such a deep poem n i no how you feel xxx |
This is such a good poem! I loved it, i actually read it a couple times=]p |
by sezz
Love this poem! very interesting and geat rhymes! |
by Breeeezie
Hey interesting poem// i can relate to it alot not the time or name but the feelings 10/10 |
by Sara
I knoww how you feel, when your thinking about someone time seems to dragg on forever.. i can relate to this, and so can many others im sure.. 5/5 and keep it up |
by fatima
Omg... that took my breath away you are amazing. yes we do write simular but this is out standing, it's so full of emotion that it did bring a tear to eye. i love this poem it deserves 10/10 |
Wow wow and wow! This is great! Keep it up! |
Woah..awesome |
by Ingrid
I can totally relate to this..overwhelming feeling of being lost without that special person. |