Lend Your Hand

by End Of Eternity   Jan 18, 2006


Crippled inside my shell
with dreams of heaven
and reality as hell
waiting for a hand
if you could lend

your face is in every drop of my blood
your name is on every tear of mine
your promises still breathes in my heart
fading hopes sometimes do shine

moments of glory, we shared once
pounds in my head every night
used to walk together for miles
now even scared of daylight
hate my own sight

what difference does it make
if this earth revolves or shake?
this dejected soul that i have
has nothing more to take

this is not how i was supposed to be
bearing wrath of someone i cant see
this unforgiven torture has to end
if you could lend
your hand

if you stay with me for awhile
if you come back once again
even if for few moments
together we earse these memories of pain

this last slug that i have under my bed
tears for years, have made my bones so weak
desperately tried but can't even bend
help, need a hand, if you could lend

just one more time

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Reading this really breaks my heart. It is so sad. I can feel your lonleness and sadness in everyword you have penned. Excellent job on this write.

    your face is in every drop of my blood
    your name is on every tear of mine
    your promises still breathes in my heart
    fading hopes sometimes do shine

    This stanza really ripped at my heart.
    Thinking of you. But with a smile on your face.
    Love your dost Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    I should have commented on this poem a lot sooner, but... I didn't so here it is.
    I love the way you wrote this poem, interesting and gripping..Amazing expression of art once more, came from your hand.
    It's weird, that everytime I read a poem of yours I wish I wrote it.. And I feel blessed to read it.
    ** Addicted I am **

    love,
    ~* TasH *~

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This one is amazing as well. You sure have alot of talent. Keep up the wonderful work.

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely job dear!
    i suppose i m reading one of ur best poems.....
    so meaningful and touching.
    i just loved the words and enjoyed reading it twice.

    keep up the good work dear!!!

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by BlackRoses14

    Such a lovely poem! Beautifuly written! You did a wonderful job writing this poem. I loved it!
    5/5 for sure! Great Job! :3 !

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