Damn you.......fine...

Really good, I dont there has been a bad poem by you so far.....well....hmmmmmm

Darkest

Wow. Beautiful written. I loved every part of this poem. It fllows. And it holds an important messege, a lesson we all should learn. Beautiful. Well done sweety. Love you -xxx-

WOW again excellence is found in our very own Lady Vengeance
which in other words means OUTSTANDING
ill have to get better at comments
Emma

Very very nice poem..love it..you're the best my friend ;)

Well, I have to say, I wasn't expecting anything quite like this. Something vaguely Emo, if I must be honest, actually. And this was a very pleasant surprise.
Your language and phrasing is very mature for your age. Your rhythm isn't at all stifled at any part and your rhym hasn't interferred with your writing.
One criticism though and that's..
"Lilly's of the purest white"
Should be 'Lillies' not 'Lilly's' but nothing major.
Pleasure to read.x

Oops, thanks for that ironic allure..

Cool, great poem, i couldn't help but think of great big white world after reading the first line.....sad.... but yea grat poem

Very vivid. I love the word usage here. I really don't have anything at all bad to say about it.

Very very good poem... i loved the detail... wonderful job

Not your best in my opinion, but all your poems are very strong and have lots of emotion to them. You can feel it come through the poem which is really hard to do. Wonderful job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

P.S. You're very close to being put on my favorites list...So I hope to see from you soon so I can comment more.