Million deaths

by Lady Vengeance   Jan 18, 2006


What a way to leave this world
Bleeding from the back
That's not my only injury
My heart sustains a crack

Please remove the bloodied knife
From my broken spine
Carve you're name into my flesh
For it's no longer mine

Toss my body in a grave
Bury me alive
Tie a ribbon 'round my throat
I won't be revived

Choking on low self-esteem
unloved, I am sold
Drowning in the purest hate
Freezing in the cold

I've died in almost every way
Now you load the gun
Ready to remove my thoughts
I pray that you have fun.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I READ IT AGAIN!
    lol
    anyway, hope to cya at the movies.
    I'll use all my power and strength to get there (theres not much, im very restricted)

    cya round
    suz

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    After reading one of your works, I became courious about the rest...different is good....book material here...I would read it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Amazing poem. It was so well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pallav

    I will give u 10/5 great piece of writing just amazing.....nice imagery has been used rather its very sad bt too good as a poetry luv ya...pal

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wow suzie your poetry has imporved soo much!!! how r u? havent taked in ages!! lol i saw the commetn on he contest by mister retribution, so this ismy way of replying. love this poem. one of the best of urs iv read (and iv read alot!!) take care

    Ruby

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