Ooooo chuck. i loved the reoccuring first line. it was written passionately and with quite alot of darkness. i especially like the end...a simple, affective and well written signing off line. the poem was overall well written.

Brad

P.S. your nan!

Hey charles, luvd dis 1, da imagery was brilliant and the poem was sensitively written & full of emotion 4 sum1 hu claims 2 neva hve luvd!!!!!
NEway keep writin cos im xpectin mor gr8 poems 4rm u!!
love
Beth x

I loved this poem. it has alot of feelings in it and its so i dont know its just really good! keep writing!

Charles, man this poem is overley deep. luvin it luvin it luvin it!