Wow...this is very very good, Avellana. Really an amazing poem. I could not agree more with it...I have been having the same thoughts/feelings. great as always, i do hope you stop feeling this way!

Seems like you started having a rhyme pattern and stopped following it near the middle. Despite that it was well done.
"Silently coursing.
Through blood so used it's black.
Streaming red in rivulets.
Down a bruised and bloodied back"
Great lines. And also great job.
~The Unforgiven

Almandite: a red garnet
~The Unforgiven

First of all, sorry it took me forever to comment back i've not been on lately, second of all youre way more talented than me hun, wow THIS POEM wow, im speechless it is absolutely beautiful, word by word, like a movie in my head, and I can relate to it, just amazing, you are one of a kind dont you ever forget, take care xxoo

Another great poem