Lyk I told u last nyt I luvd dis poem. Da flow wos x-cellent and da image ov da mask wos brilliant. PPl myt think I'm biased but I think u r an amazin poet n dis poem supports dat opinion 100%.
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BDW I LOVE U MORE and dat is da end ov it!!!!!

Very very nice poem bruv. i really understood the themes behind this poem, rhyming was nice because it helped the poem flow from one stanza to the other.

Oh well done!! i loved it and i can cpmpletely relate to it. It flowed really well and you expressed yourself amazingly! thanks for your comments and suggestions. You're an brilliant writer. xoxo

I love this poem and its true. i liked the way u wrote it the words u chose. well done! keep writing!

Really well written peice.

What a wonderfully written poem Bradly . The flow was amazing and each stanza lead to a brilliant ending.

I have to say I honestly loved this poem !! One I will always remember .

Wow i loce it and it really speacks out to me because i feal the same way. and i knowone day youll be able to take off the mask and show your self

Its funny how everyone else wear masks too

I love this poem! i can really relate to it! it is exactly how i feel about my life....and to be honest i really hate it! i wish i could just be a happy person and have alot to look forward to in life..but that never seems to happen for me!
thanx for commenting on my poems! i really appreciate it! it means alot to me! and thanx for letting me use your poem! i alos really appreciate that too!
Keep up the amazing work like i have already said before!
5/5 on this poem! its great! and your welcome from me saying you could go somewhere with your poems! because i honestly think you could!
Love Paige
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thanx again hun for the comments!
xxoo

Wow, this is great

So you live in the shadow life also? Above all; this might be my fav.

I really want to cry after reading this because I feel the exact same thing. A really powerful poem.

Wow...kinda reminds me...of me...b/c in real life no one can see past the mask i wear...nice job!

I think this is something almost everyone can relate to, and I'm one hundred percent sincere when I say that you've left me speechless. Your poetry honestly blows me away.

Have you ever seen the show Dexter? he's a serial killer & is always saying how he has to put on a mask and fake who he is because no would would accept him. this reminds me of that a lot.
love it.
5/5.