Wow! Great poem, sweetie! I loved how you used this part:

So if love is what we share then I am the fool.
It would mean that this whole time I have been in love with you.
With this I know that my friends would agree.
But to fall for you-so uncharacteristic of me.

in both the top and bottom. It's beautiful the way you wrote this. I'm glad that you've found someone who means so much, even if you just thought he was a friend at first. Keep up the amazing writing hun =)

'But to fall for you-so uncharacteristic of me'

I love this line and it's great how you repeated it cause it just sounds so sweet and fits really well. The whole piece was well-written, you definately have something with this someone! Def. 5/5 all around.

Thats reli amazing how it jus seems so much like how i feel about sum1. thanks 4 commenting on my poem ur an amazin poet, got any tips?