The Torment and Hurt Part IV

by The Poetic Child   Jan 18, 2006


The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

Hearing that hello
i felt so relieved
Like i just made a goal
and that goal i achieved

She sounded Fine
My heart felt Rejoice
To know your OK
To just hear her voice

everything was good at once
until i messed up again
I'm just screwing up
I'm praying to god Amen

I'm praying that he helps me out
send an angel to give me a guide
unleash my heart and love
express in a way i cant hide

She got mad at me again
She just had enough
I'm holding back tears
I'm trying to act tough

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I cant act tough
the truth is i love her
she has my heart and love
my love is not under a cover

I'm not gonna hide it anymore
I love you so much i cant explain
The words in the dictionary cant tell her,
I'm just being drenched in this rain

I'm stuck in this position alone
I'm praying to God to give me a hand
So i can show her i love her so much
To give me the strength to be her man

I may make a mistake
but the thing is its not my intention
I wish she could listen to me
For me to get attention

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot

I'm trying to give my heart out
hoping for some Forgiveness
But she justs rejects and rips me
I'm thinking o my goodness

If she could just take a moment...
just take a moment and see
That i have the most love to give
and i want her to stick with me

Stick Through it Together
i want to make it all right
I want to be the shoulder that she Cries on,
The One who holds her at night

I'm promising myself
I'd try not to mess up again
I'm trying to make things better
were going on Month 10

I don't want to mess up
I wanna stick with my baby
but its her decision
shes the only one who can save me

I messed up again
but I'm promise i wont anymore
I wont allow myself to do it
This is my poem number 4

This is my Vow
Right Now

I wont make a mistake
Cause i love her too much

The Torment and hurt
The pain i just got
The Pain of your hurt
The pain i was Shot.....

Please Comment and Vote I would really appreciate..I'm sure this will be my last one....

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    EXCELLENT!!!!! i dont kno what to say!!.....
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Wow1 i get it now! And you shouldn't feel embarrased or pessured to write a fith one! I know that i would appreciate it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Wow1 i get it now! And you shouldn't feel embarrased or pessured to write a fith one! I know that i would appreciate it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    I am soo sorry! i think that o will read the other ones as well as this one again! Please forgive me, i tend to jump to conclusions just as much as my bunny chubs likes to jump!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    That was a good poem, but to tell you the truth, i was a bit confused! I am NOT trying to be mean! I just think that you should make things a bit more clear. 3/5 is fair! Keep up the god work!