This seems to be like nothing I've read of yours. Kind of like me with "Dance" , but still you find a way to make a poem very realistic and sort of your own. I like the Panic! At The Disco title though..=]

I dont understand it, but i like

Isn't that poem title a song title by Panic at the Diso???
But anyways I love your writting, you do a very wonderful job at it!!!
BloodRedRose

Hey nice poem keep up the hard work i liked it alot 5/5

I dun rely understand it but i lyke it a lot. 7/10