Awwww this is so pretty E>. I believe Jay and you are great together, and if he ever hurt you, he wouldn't live to see the next day. Great job with this, it was all so great, perfectly written. xxxxx Take care, smile.

Much love,
Mortie.x.

This poem was really good!!!!god topic you have choosen.love it

He loves us very much you know,
Oh dear old heart of mine.
Those bruises will fade you know,
Just give them some sweet time.

He knows you are tired and sore,
He said he will be gentle with us.
Can we please give him a chance?
And avoid the hustle and fuss?

I have a feeling he is special,
And he says what he means.
He won't yell or hit us, I promise,
Our happiness we will redeem.

excellent stanza.5/5
keep up the good work.

That was cute...it doesn't suck at al.haha.:)