If i do say so myself i lvoe the depth..the way i described it instead of right out and saying it was surger y i was talking about. Coulda' been better i suppose but it was a hard topic to write about. Keep it up..lovely poem! lol. XXLISSA

Nice Nice Nice, That was nice, i think you can do good in Lyrical Music...Some people say i should rap or sing my music..You should to, this would go great...I love when people leave dedications on the bottom it shows they dont write poetry for fun or cause there bored..but they have meaning in there poetry..nice job 5/5 thanx for all your comments..now im returnig my favor..

Wow this is a great poem like all ur others

marady

Good poem but the stanzas rhythms didnt match up. the rhyme scheme was off too. it was very forth coming and wonderfully thoughtful though. definatley a work of a poet. good job.