I don't want to say "i know how you feel" cause I don't, but i recognize some of the feelings you are writing about. sometimes i too feel empty and numb. But that's not much compared to these you are refering to. but if you want to talk you can email me at jonde_j@hotmail.com. good poem

Dear nelle....i loved ur poem...its so deep and touching...10/5...i just wanna say tat ur emotions jst came alive with this poetry...luv ya pal

Very deep,it may be your first but it's well done keep working at it you'll perfect your poetry skills as you continue to write.

Its a great poem for being ur first. it expresses great feeling 5/5

That was really good and no its not too much to ask i hope every thing works out 4 u ! xox

Ohh i like that was very sad and i know i understand hang in there. xoxo Rach

This is a very good poem,I love it,It was deep and very well written keep it up....5/5

Hey this is a good poem....and i hope u do find happiness soon...plz dont feel this way b/c there are so many greatthings out there in the world waiting for you....good luck!
-peace-

Hey, I think this one is really sad but its also REALLY GOOD n I think you should write more cause I like this one alot.

Same here.... good poem ... well expressed...

if you ever need anyone to listen, let me know... ok?

big hugs,

michelle

Your poems are all like a deep blue ocean that no one can get through it. you are very very great person nelle

Elow to your self

Be glad cause god give you a good heart for sure you are

I love this it not only tells how i feel but i can feel your pain