I like it....simple, yet says so much! Hot, hot, hot!

Great poem Simon...I was already missing your poetry and wondering were you were...well, I know UK lol Take care my friend, thanks for sharing... Great poem. Oh yeah, I saw the picture of you and your wife... she's beautiful.

Like Bill says, "simple" ... but that's the best ... letting us fill in the rest. :)

Such a passionate and sweet write....

love ya, Ann

Wonderful & beautiful!!!! Excellent job!!!

OH MY!!!!!!! How sexual...... damn it's hot in here, where's my fan......

Nice job..it says alot about how u feel. i like it. keep it up

WOW