Weak

by Breyon   Jan 18, 2006


I didnt want to let go, but holding on was only making me weaker.
See for years I was devoted to us: two spirits intertwined in a relationship forever loving and alwayz looking forward to \"our\" future, and not giving much attention to the present.

Not remembering that at some point all good things must come to an end. So when the words came from your mouth my heart dropped with my jaw.

But i continued to hold on...

You moved on and i stayed by your side holding on to nothing but thin air.

But still i held on...Not wanting to let go but holding on was only making me weaker.

But as i stood for months in the dark reaching out...waiting i realized you werent coming back to hold on to me i was alone, but still i didnt want to let go

but holding on was only making me weaker...

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    That holds wonderful meaning. was great!

    good luck and keep writing!

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow love how the intensity builds in thsi poem and how you reapeated, but holding on is only making me weaker. Niice style and approach for this poem.

    XXLISSA