Feel

by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*   Jan 19, 2006


The cold hard steel
Agianst my wrist
Takes the pain away
Takes the blame
Makes me sane
All the feeling is gone
Numbness echos through
Calling gently,
Falling forward
Reaching out
Searching for relief
Nothing helping
Nothing saving
Just as it all ends

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  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    WOw. That was excellent. It was short but powerful. Keep up the great work.!
    Bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is great..i like this part "Takes the pain away
    Takes the blame
    Makes me sane"

    Really good..keep it up :)
    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Short but effective, expressed well keep it up
    xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This si a very welll expressed and strong peice

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Pain is always a great topic for poetry, i love how u expressed so many emotions, in one little poem. this was a very good write. 5/5

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